"We The Poets" started as a weekly poetry workshop for readers of our local internet exchanges, and due to wider ranging interest, I am now widening the catchment area and making it into a blog. Each post has writing exercises and examples of poetry on different topics and themes. You can enter your responses in the "comments" area or personally to me in my contact form and I will do my best to respond.
This
is not a class ! A circle implies equals participating in a shared
activity, and that is the intention. Any comments from me should be
taken with the appropriate amount of salt.
I usually suggest two – sometimes they resonate, sometimes not. Write to one or both.
Suggestions: Darkness into Light
The Story of Sleeping Beauty, told your way.
Please indicate whether you would like your contributions to be signed with your own name, with a pseudonym or anonymously. Please do this each time, as I might forget previous requests. I hope that we can all regard the circle as a workshop for mutually supportive equals, but not everyone may feel that way. It is the work that matters. Also, things change !
WORD GAME/EXERCISE POEMS
Here are five words to use in a short poem you can create any way you wish:
Try these words: pull, travel, kind, footfall, depth.
The strict version : no change in word form, you have to use each word exactly as given.
The less strict: minor variations possible: e.g. "pull" could be changed to pulled, pulls, etc.
It is surprising what gems can arise from such exercises. Remember: Mary Oliver's "Wild Geese" was written as an exercise !
POEMS YOU'D LIKE TO SHARE
Famous poems, poems we won't know, poets we have never heard of, translations from poets outside our language and culture: each week I shall be asking every participant in the circle to bring a poem to read, recite or hand over to be read. Finding and choosing the weekly poem has often been the most valuable and popular part of the whole process. Have one ready for our first full outing.
A POEM TO EXPLORE: (optional, allows more literary study if that attracts. We might include further discussion for those who would like it)
"Sudden Light" by Dante Gabriel Rossetti :
I have been here before,
But when or how I cannot tell:
I know the grass beyond the door,
The sweet keen smell,
The sighing sound, the lights around the shore.
You have been mine before,—
How long ago I may not know:
But just when at that swallow's soar
Your neck turn'd so,
Some veil did fall,—I knew it all of yore.
Has this been thus before?
And shall not thus time's eddying flight
Still with our lives our love restore
In death's despite,
And day and night yield one delight once more?
pull, travel, kind, footfall, depth
The travel of the sea
The pull of the Earth
The footfall of my kind
The call of the depths -
The matter of profundity
The centering of the world.
The Galaxy
A tattered dragon skin
Thrown across the shoulders of the sky
Scales glistening in the deepest/profoundest night
Thanks, Richard! A platform which encourages poetry and prompts this “poet” into pondering the potential of words.
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